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I Tore My Heart Out For You..

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But You didn't Want it, You wanted My Body.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I tore my heart out for you Critique-
(Yes I said the title to make myself look formal xD)

I'll just put it down on a very basic layout of Vision, Originality etc.

Vision; The vision is ok, but of course some may differ in opinions and give me a a shitload of their comments~
I'm not judging it on how long it took of course <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="=P" title="=P (Razz)"/>

Originality; The style of your work is slightly ''unique''. But some effects seem a little childish. (No, that wasn't an insult :3) For example, the blood looks more like they walked through a spiders web that had recently been coated in thick paint. Over all, nor bad~

Technique; Here's the tricky part: as I said before, it seems quite messy and slightly lazy. But it it is unique in it's own way, so those aren't as important. The pixel art is nice to say it bluntly, but not OUTSTANDING!

Impact; I really have nothing to say about the impact... ಠ-ಠ


TheEnd.